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Well the best thing to come out of your game had to be the background music which suited the gameplay very nicely. The character design of the user controlled creature was a bit too simple, could have been nice to add a little more detail to it. The game itself was quite fun and it was very hard too, so it was a nice challenge. The controls worked well but the enemies were possibly too fast. Overall a fun game.
Author's Response:
It was hard... wow emm... thanks lol^^I know I love the music.
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Your game has a good base to build on, i like the concept of going around a maze type course in a certain amount of time but i think your need to make the earlier levels more easier for the novice gamers, so they can get their eye in. The lack of sound is a bit of a problem, rather then going with the idea of adding voices a simple musical loop, or multiple musical choices for the background would be nice. Overall a good effort.
Author's Response:
Thx, I will sure add some sounds and a nice music,
but it hard to find some..
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The first thing that i have to mention about your game is the attention to detail that you have added to this, it makes the game so much more enjoyable. The music that you had looping in the background was intense but suited this nicely. I would just try to increase the level of detail to your design, i mean its obvious you spent so much time on the gameplay that your graphics have suffered somewhat. Overall an enjoyable game.
Author's Response:
thank you for the good feedback. and your right, i spent a fair bit of time on this, i still feel i could've added more. oh well. who knows. maybe one day a sequal i can make it better
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Well this as a flash entry was really bad, i mean the only thing you succeeded in was tricking people into thinking it was one thing and then delievering another, so i guess for that you get a bit of credit for your humour and your song selections were intense but besides that it was pretty poor. I mean i could name numerous things for you to do to improve this, like perhaps making an animation next time?
Author's Response:
i do tht all the time nobb
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Well im not sure who exactly this person or thing is so maybe you should try explaining it better to the general public who have no idea about what your talking about and perhaps make a hilarious flash animation about him, mocking him, rather then what you have done here because its just so simple that i cant give it anymore then a three which is a real pity because i loved your title.
Author's Response:
lmfao. the title made you lol? awesome.
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Very cute little flash you have designed here, the highlight for me had to be that great piano piece you had playing in the background it really setup the flash the perfect way. The humour was good i especially liked how he rolled onto his side and caught on fire. The character designs were great for the sun but the guy eating the ice cream could have had some more effort put into his appearance. Overall a funny short.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliments and constructive criticism, appreciate it!
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Very unusual chemistry between the two characters the robot was really funny, i loved his voice and when he laughed and then cut the other guy off for laughing too, that was gold. The character designs were great. Overall a solid effort.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and by the way, that robot was me. >: ]
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The first thing that stood out for me was the unique character designs you used to play out this scene from 300, very different and it made your short stand out to me. The way you displayed your subtitles were a little annoying and could have been better placed at the bottom of the page. Overall i like how you kept the flash quiet until the sound clip and your humour was pretty decent.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the Constructive Criticism, i see what you mean with the subtitles and will keep that in mind. And i realise that it is very short. There are multiple sounds, don't know if you heard them all. And not sure if their was much humour their but thanks for the review!
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Well i have to open my review with a complaint about the amount of violence you have used in this, not because i didnt enjoy it but because i dont know if you should be giving that much fighting and action away in the trailer!, i hope you can still top it in the full version. The background music you used was intense and fast paced just like your flash so it suited in well. Overall a great job and i am looking forward to your full lengthed entry.
~H-J~
Author's Response:
Well there is alot of fighting. i had no scenes really that had no fighting, They get to a point of no Fighting but that hasnt been hit yet i am on 2000 frames
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I thought you did a great job here especially for your first flash effort, it was highly enjoyable. I like how you had him sleeping on the couch before he was rudely interrupted by the beggar at the door, the sound clips of the door knocking were probably the highlight of your flash as they sounded as if they were coming from my front door! Overall, good effort and i loved your character design for the main guy, the looping was a little annoying but nothing major.
~H-J~
Author's Response:
The looping irritated me too, I think I figured out how to fix it though, I'm going to remake this one with more violence, better animation, and possibly some speech
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