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Alittle weird, i mean you set the scene up nicely but you didnt really add much too it in terms of animation or humour. Ill give you that i thought that it was alittle funny though, but i dont believe that it was worthy of being the sole joke, maybe you should have had a joke that happened as a result of the action she took, but just ending it like that is alittle creepy to say the least. I thought that you did the character designs really well, and i think that the song was well chosen although i did think that it may have been over killed in terms of the quailty.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)