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Turned out to be a quite a good ad. What i thought was wrong with it though was probably the way that you drew the faces of the characters i thought they were just too stretched out for my liking. I also thought that maybe you could have gotten rid of that musical song and instead just have some gritty vehcile designs and an explosion for the end and then maybe finish it off with a voice over ad for fedx at the end. I thought that you animation did come off well though, and i like the shortcuts you took for the flag on the jeep. Overall you have constructed a pretty funny short.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)