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Turned out to be a quite a good ad. What i thought was wrong with it though was probably the way that you drew the faces of the characters i thought they were just too stretched out for my liking. I also thought that maybe you could have gotten rid of that musical song and instead just have some gritty vehcile designs and an explosion for the end and then maybe finish it off with a voice over ad for fedx at the end. I thought that you animation did come off well though, and i like the shortcuts you took for the flag on the jeep. Overall you have constructed a pretty funny short.

~HJ~
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I find it rather strange that your credits seem to be longer then the actual flash themselves. Its a shame that you dont hold a shot longer then a second because i would like to see what you can do with it. This didnt come off as funny at all to me because of the duration but what i would like to see you do with this concept is create a number of very short flash efforts and collab them all together into the one menu so the users can get a mild laugh out of it.

~HJ~
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Well i thought that it was a very strange and unique idea ill give you that much but i thought that you just didnt hold it for long enough, i think that whole length of the flash came out at 4 seconds which was a shame. The highlight had to be the funny sound you made when you squashed the rubber doody, and the stopmotion wasnt badly done. Overall i would like to see you do something alittle more with a idea like this, there is potential in it to create some good laughs.

~HJ~
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That didnt turn out that badly in the end. I thought that the start of it just looked as if you were just going to go over the lines of a normal stick movie but you went for a comedic one and i thought that you nailed it. I like the facial expressions you did for the characters and i like how you got creative and decided to show the second half first and the other way around for the other half. The country music track you chose for the background also accompanied the piece nicely.

~HJ~
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Well that was really strange but i did get the message you were trying to give across. The text you used was great, i cant believe that someone on here is capable of writing such harsh words and yet they are so honest, from yourself about yourself. Your style really did come off fantastic, but i thought that what you were working that style from, the graphics, wasnt really that good but because you did the animation so well i kinda cared less at what the graphics looked like. Overall its good to see something deep from a deep person.

~HJ~
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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Yeah, the gfx themselves aren't too great. I just wanted to bust it out quickly, in my 'moment of clarity', yaknow?

Good to know that folk don't mind too much about that.

Thanks so much for all the kind words. You get really in-depth with your reviews and cover a lot, which is great!

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I thought this was rather intriguing although i felt that i was cut off way too soon. What you did well with this was probably that great dark shadowy style you went with, and i did like the sound you had for the background it sounded as if it was from some sort of samurai related event, not that i know much about the topic. I think the style was alright but maybe afew more shots of parts of the samurai instead of just the whole samurai such as maybe the sword or the head gear would make this more symbolic. Overall not a bad little flash, just needed abit of a push in passion.

~HJ~
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Sk8erGirl14 responds:

yeah...I see what you mean...but, my next samurai movie will be much better...

I would like to give as many authors as i can, straight to the point feedback with my reviews. So it would be nice if you could return with a response :)

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