Hamy-jamy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Become: Festival Edition]

Well that was different

That was not what i expected at all, and to be honest was one of the best claymations i have seen on ng for some time!, You did more then most ppl do with this style you actually constructed decent.. if not remarkable characters that really gave life to the flash. Great work, i was gob smacked at what you could do with pieces of clay.

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[Mario and the Virus]

Bad ingredients

This just didnt have a chance sir, i mean the jokes were just too childish you need to be able to hook into the teen audience. The use of a mario sprite and background were just a show of the weak effort you put into this, you need to give this more like making the character designs bigger for one would have made a better difference, remember to direct the attention of the audience to were you want them to look.

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[Fuckin n00bs (teaser)]

Meh

I liked the explosion of that stick hitting the land mine, but besides that this needed some real going over. I mean you cant just have sticks, you need to give them identity try to keep as far away as possible from sticks. Error 2, try and include background they really do set up the scene so much better. Error 3, try and include more in a trailer or a comedy part then just a weak little one act, mix it up alittle give the audience something they didnt expect going into it, maybe acouple of shorts in one movie would have worked.

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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)

[El Perro de FlashyNewb]

Help i need somebody

Ouch, man i can see why this has the score it has, you really butchered everything they teach you in flash 101 and you just went and did you own thing, i have to admit i laughed but i dont think i did for the right reasons.. Not much effort put in, not much reward given out, sorry sir.

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