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Wow you did really well here with the character designs, they looked so professionally done. I thought that the part the really stuck out though was the very unusual accent that the main character had, was he australian?, i thought that the character deserved a more mature voice. Some of the sound effects were alittle questionable like the ones used for knocking down the wood and the ones used in the sword fight but what was not questionable was the great effort that you dont see enough anymore, i loved the cliffhanger you left this series on and i hope that you are working even harder on the second part, this is setting up to be a real epic that may take several episodes to explore the world and explain everything well.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)