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Well i thought that the idea had potential it was just in the execution that lacked great design. I mean i would have liked if i, the user, got to shoot the stick with the gun i chose instead of just watching a movie clip of a stick shooting it with the gun, it was alittle dull. But i did like the selection of weapons you did have up for offer although i would have liked you to have added alittle more noticable of a difference to the deaths. Good work.
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Wow well that was alot shorter then i expected this to be, i presume that you havent compressed this at all maybe some to look into on future projects. The idea was funny, but i must question why the cop was a white male with a sheep body, i guess it was funny just in a strange and scary way. The gun shots were well done but i thought but i thought that you really did need to add some voice acting just for the reading out of the line at the beginning.
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Nice, it seemed like more of a company logo at the beginning of a flash entry though, which isnt a bad thing you see ppl upload these sorts of things all the time to get them rated. I thought that the muppets song you chose to use in the background was well choosen for the flash but the apple seemed pretty dull by itself on the screen if i may i would suggest that you add a background of some description.
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I dont think you had to degrade your effort as much as you did as i thought that there were afew good points that made this a worthy watch. I liked the animation to begin with when it comes down to it if you do the animation right it doesnt matter how bad your graphics are. The sound wasnt that bad either and i think the backgrounds were well designs which really does deliever to overall appeal.
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Well firstly its sad but i am old enough to remember that song and man you have done a heap more improving to it then what it was. Your style was really strange though im not sure about the graphics, i thought that maybe it was alittle too simple in design for me in the end. Animation wise it really did kick some serious butt, great work on that part of it. It was good to see that song put to some good use, then rotting in my brain.
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Well dude you were trying to get the audience to laugh and you have made me really crack up. I thought highlight of your flash effort had to be the hilarious designs you did for your characters really did your piece justice. Maybe alittle more effort into the sound would make this a real winner. Good effort, minor improvements just needed.
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Well that turned out to be pretty decent. I thought that your graphic designs were good but what was really lacking was proper background designs, they just didnt strike me. I thought that the music selection was the highlight of your flash piece and i liked how you played it out. Nice to see something different.
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I thought that the two of those clocks really did have some chemistry between them although the graphics were alittle simple i thought that the strongest part of this flash had to be your sense of humour. It would have been nice if you did more then just kill off one of the characters maybe show a really cool 3d scene or something to prove him wrong would have came off better.
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ye, i did this movie back when i was just starting out with flash. its actually made as a parody because i didnt like clock movies. who would of thought that i would join them :S
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Wow that turned out to be alot more graphic then i thought it would be and that is directed at the violence aspect of things. The animation was pretty simple but you did do enough to make you point. The style of the flash was good i thought that bullet 8 thing was a very creative object and made for some interesting scenes, although i do think it was way too short.
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yes, this is actually just a work in progress version of this.
http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/287887
the full one is alittle bit longer with full color and some better animations.
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Wow i like how you added 5 entries for the 5th installment:
Noobking: Well i thought the direction you were going with at the beginning was alright but then you just had to give up and i ended up watching father and son doing the deed in flash 8/10
Noobqueen: That wasnt that badly drawn by the end of it although i thought that there was an easy opening to have added the theme song from the queer eye tv show. 8/10
Noobstar: Well i thought that although they were only sticks and that it did only run for only a couple of seconds that there was a good sense of humour from it and the animation wasnt bad. 7/10
Satanicnoob: Well this didnt turn out that badly, i thought that the use of famous voice clips worked to your favour really well here. 9/10
Noob_Ben_Hur: Well this is the first of the many first episodes to have actually been followed up on and i was most looking forward to a second but you left me on yet another cliffhanger at the end 8/10
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glad you like it.
we always try to have as many parts as possible. but sometimes there aint that many members up for it and then you just have to go with what you got.
well, in this one we got alot atleast :)
I would like to give as many authors as i can, straight to the point feedback with my reviews. So it would be nice if you could return with a response :)
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