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It nearly seemed as if you were doing a animated version of what happens on the portal but as a flash presentation. You did a great job with the graphics, and your animation skills were great for this production. I thought that the background designs were well done also. What really made this special to me was the appearance of P-bot as a character in a flash it almost seemed alittle creepy how easily he fitted into a clock world.
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The clock face was alittle too big for strawberry but besides that i didnt mind the character designs you did. The joke was superb i am glad you didnt say anything regarding it in your description because it would have ruined it for me, the sad thing is he seemed so happy that strawberry did what he did. I loved how you held that last moment until he exploded that was a great touch.
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I guess you had alittle bit of built up energy because you just went onto something random after the credits. The graphics were pretty doggy and i thought that it was alittle distorted in size in most scenes. You said you did all the sounds which is kinda impressive although there wasnt that many, i thought that the weak yell was pretty darn funny. It was weird to see the seasame street opening interprated by a flash artist but i enjoyed it. Oh and the ending with the axe.. gold.
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Hey not a bad joke, i mean the joke was that it was taking him a long time to walk to his location right?. I thought that the evil music you had in the background was a good choice, i didnt like your graphic design in this one neither the character design nor the background designed thrilled me, but i was pleased with the location of the subs on this one alot easier to read there, highlight again has to be your humour maybe expanding on it would help.
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Well what a cool short story. I thought that the graphics were good, i mean your character designs for the clocks were good, what i do think that could have been done to improve on your effort would be the use of animation instead of just random pictures with slight movement. But that doesnt take away from this piece, the music choice for the background was good, on another notei would have liked to have seen the subs in maybe a clean box at the bottom of the window. The highlight of your piece would have had to have been your humour you nailed the jokes.
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You would kinda guess that this wouldnt be that funny, but hey i laughed. Although i did find that there was various things that could have been improved on, such as the graphics, animation with the feet was alittle rough and the sounds werent that overly exciting, But by improving those things you would be taking away from the true heart of this little short, so i would probably not want it any other way.
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It is rare that the humour of a flash animation isnt rude/crude, this was a fresh change up. I thought that the idea of basing your character designs on such a simple design is a great also, because you have the advantage of easily animating it and its loveable that everyone watching can enjoy it too. I thought that the joke at the end was good although i was kinda expecting it.
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Well its obvious that as an artist your main inspiration stems from Star Wars, which isnt bad i mean you do the style well. The humour came off alittle dull but i dont think that it was fully because of your material, i would say that it was probably due to the fact that there was no voice acting for the piece. I thought that overall you did the appropriate music for the piece and i loved the way you drew jabba.
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Came out as quite a nice mix, the music and the star wars theme piece hasnt been done before and maybe because no ordinary person could think of it. I thought that the major part of my overall score has been chosen because of the level of humour you have got here, the part were you needed improvement was in the graphics department and to an even larger degree the animation, it seemed alittle blotchy at times (dont ask me to define blotchy), i have a feeling you know what i mean.
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Well this was pretty cute. What i thought made this short entertaining was the great character design that you created for your little person i dont know what creature you were sculpting off though. The sound was subtle but you made your impact with it. I have seen similiar jokes like this alot before but that didnt seem to make this any less appealing. I thought that the long shot at the beginning was unneccesary though.
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Age 37, Male
Reviewer
Open Universities Australia
Newgrounds.com
Joined on 7/15/02
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