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What happened?, all of a sudden there was no colour, background and the feel of it gave off the impression that you were just trying to rush it. What i really was upset about was the lack of your voice acting which i think is your strong suit. You do have a killer sense of humour and no matter how badly its drawn you were still about to throw in your sick twisted humour. Good work overall just be sure to finish as strongly as you start.
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no, that was intentional. The bad artwork symbolizes how things can go bad in an instant (like the art changed once the bad stuff happened.) Unfortunately, not a lot of people understood that, but hey, we have our failures. Besides, I wouldn't make it look THAT obvious if I were to rush it.
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Oh my dear fredrik where do i begin on this flash. Its not that it was bad it was just that certain aspects were alittle off and therefore caused the entire piece to be off. Your graphics were simple but you did draw a decent setting excluding the boy his features were out of proportion, your voice acting was strong but because of where you are from the english didnt come off the best and thus made me laugh in all the wrong places for all the wrong reasons, maybe you could do a flash piece using your native tongue and just adding subtitles im sure noone will mind much and it will come over alot more how you want it too then how its being percieved now. Not a bad idea, i know you have the humour to create a humourous flash and you do, its just your other skills that are letting you down.
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I liked it man, you really did pull off a good joke in this one. I did like the way your character was designed although he seemed alittle too good for the sorroundings i thought. That alarm was shocking btw, it startled me something mad im telling you, did you make that noise yourself? I thought that doing a short on the start of summer was a great idea but not all great ideas come off that well on flash luckily for you this was fun.
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yes, I made that noise. (then, thought of FlashKit, but this had already been submitted. I have an alarm clock that's a chicken that sings and plays a guitar for the alarm, but the recording for it didn't work. Plus, the surroundings were meant to be a little simplistic, to make Mitch stand out more. (Yes, that's his name. He's my cartoon doppleganger.)
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Ahh fredrik i dont want to be overly mean to you about something but i really didnt think your voice was cut out for flash presentations sorry my friend, you did make it humourous its just that the acting didnt come off too well. I thought that there was genuine effort put into the graphics but they also didnt come off the best, and i really didnt know why everyone in the flash kept coming to the boys window to address him instead of the front door. One thing is for sure after watching that and it is that you do have a good sense of humour.
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Well i didnt even know that there was ppl who thought that this date was so deadly but it was still good to see how you did this. I thought the way you used the devil was really creative and alittle annoying in a way because i just wanted the guy to go up into flames or something but i guess its funnier the way you did it, oh and btw that voice acting of yours is terrific keep it up.
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I don't. I'm just making fun of people's fears. That's what I would have done if I'd still go through with that "Y2K" project. It would have been this, but a robot would gouge me with his claw at the end. I'm not doing that only cuz it might get blammed since it'd be to darn similar to this.
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Well you got alittle creative here, trying to make us think that one thing was going to happen and then hit us with something completly unexpected, shame on you. The was very well done in mostly all fields once again but i think that you could fit alittle something in the area of sound just to beef it up alittle, although it does have a nice quailty about it being simple like it is.
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Well hey it was predictable that once it didnt start working what was going to happen but i thought that what made this so good was the great style you brought to this. The graphics were simple but your animation was great and i also have to give you props for that great dog wimpering sound for the end. You have found a good and simple design for the basis of a series to grow.
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First thought that comes to my head after viewing that would have to be of how extremely disturbing that was, i mean a seal actually got beaten to death but i guess your graphics and animation had to be good to have made me feel sick to my stomach so good job with that. The sound was really good in this one too, i could actually feel every whack of the stick as it hit the seal. Overall it was funny just in a very dark way.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)
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Was there some sort of hidden message under this flash because you put jesus into a flash about cloning, if so that was pretty heavy and religious which is kinda cool. I liked your graphics for the clones and although the voice acting was good the quailty was truly lacking. The comedy level was alright although it did get kinda dry although i guess that was what you were trying to display. You did capture a good idea and transfered it well onto flash.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)
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