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This is better then your sequel which is kinda odd usually ppl improve after the original. Well i could understand what was going on in this episode because you gave enough time to read everything. Things i thought let down this flash had to be the shortness of the flash because you didnt give anytime for it to unfold and i thought the lack of sound really does effect the level at which a short is percieved by the fans. I did think that your graphcis were good though.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)