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Doesnt the title speak the truth in this title. I mean it was alright what i did like about this flash was the choice of song, it was catchy and suprisingly i hadnt heard of it before but what i did like about it was how much it was lacky from the animation point of view, i would have loved for you to have come up with a crazy random flash music vid for this.
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Flashlight your short was cool i liked that disturbing music. Blueberry i was alittle sad that this was all you had to offer but you did draw a mean rocket. Green dude with the smurf number in the background, the graphics turned out great i was sucked into a trance. Pineapple i liked the deep meaningful message, your backgrounds werent that bad either. Backhair! i loved that moonwalking number although you should have had like the background rotating for like a crazy effect or something. Crazy weird dice dude, you speak a strong message and i dont think anyone is going to say otherwise. I finish it off with a mexican flag dude, cool as piece with a mad note number in the background i really liked the beat i was bouncing with. Sorry i couldnt address you guys by your proper names i tried my hardest :P
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Blueberry=Bilberry Clock
He does draw a mean rocket.
Green Dude=Green Block
I was sucked into a seziure myself.
Back Hair=Arskagarf
I'll update the moom scene when I get around to it.
Crazy Wierd Dice Dude=D20 Clock
He speaks from the gut.
Mexican Flag Dude=Italian Block
Oh, so close but I see why you got confused with the name.
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Now that wasnt bad, it was obvious that your influences in drawing stem from the anime-style based on your final character design. I was actually pretty please with this although it was short, you could have stretched out each individual evolution and try and have some fun with every stage. Maybe adding a background and some sound too would help.
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Buildings were lacking detail, you should have added some windows or some color i mean something. The lack of color in the sky didnt help either. Who exactly was kyle? did he replicate himself and then kill himself? does training really include killing yourself? the thing you have to be careful with stick movies is not to be pointless and always try to explain the set up you dont even have to say anything your flash should speak for you.
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Well i give props to someone that can pull off a decent fbf and you did it in this. The main character you used for this was really ugly, i dont know if that was a good thing or not.. really just a note. The lack of color wasnt ever going to help the finished product. On a final note i would just like to compliment you on your fine voice acting.
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Oh you are indeed a smart little cookie i could see straight through this. Your song choice was what made this flash happen, without it all i was watching was a bunch of dots a scribble, but with the music it became a trance of such into a dance of lights. So i will have to give my hat off for thinking alot before just submitting alot of lines.
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Well after watching that i would have to say that the first thing that comes to mind is unneccesary. Now, from the various flash entries i have seen i have never seen someone do a trailer for a flash that is basically going to be a stickman fighting flash. What i advise you should have done is just release the full version and let it play out. The graphics didnt show anything promising but that light musical number in the background wasnt bad.
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It is really rare to come along something like this. You actually used sticks as a way to be funny instead of just radomly fighting and that being it. This was hilarious and even though it was really short, the graphics and backgrounds werent that good and there was only the one sound of the gun fire, you hit your mark.. literally.
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Omg, i dont know what was going on there. I must have trailed off or something because i completely lost track of what Strawberry Lock was going on about. After awhile i started thinking that it was alittle strange and that i may have heard this part before... this was after 6 solid minutes of watching it, that means i must have watched that over 5 times, so very sad.
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SBL was just talking about locks, nothing more. Thanks for the review :)
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Age 37, Male
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Open Universities Australia
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Too Much Time On My Hands 
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Awesome lights 
20X SAMURAI 
the jerk!! 
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