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The main problem with this would have to be what you did with your graphic abilities in the way of your animation, i thought it came off alittle cheap and its a shame because i saw alot of effort put into this you needed to give your characters more joints. The voice over was really good though and your choice of music was good. Overall just keep at it, youll get better.
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You totally overdid that voice, you really killed the joke. I did also notice that the animation wasnt too good either. I did like your graphcis though they were alittle simple yet looked good. Your choice of music was good but it was a shame that you didnt get into the chorus.
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I liked your use of skateboard slang in this. I thought that the graphics were alot better then most i mean you actually made characters instead of stickmen and you have accomplished more for it. I have to say that i thought the text in the speak bubbles was really not needed i could hear you so easily which is a compliment of sorts i suppose. Good work, and keep it popping, does that even make sense?
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It came over as alittle poor in quailty to me, in the graphic department. The violence was well done though i mean that cut above his eye was pretty gruesome. The sound was alittle on the poor side too. I could see some vast improvements in the animation making this alot more interesting to watch.
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That was great, it was so simple yet i couldnt contain my willingness to laugh. The graphics for this small flash were good and the animation was well done, although it was simple. You should have had him go futher then just being angry with him, i was on the verge of wetting myself to be quite honest.
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I was going to say that this was just another stick movie before you gave me that incredible slow-mo kill that effect really did save your behind. The graphics are woeful though and i think you know that too. The sound effects were great though i really felt as if it were happening right next to me.
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Gah, you tease! your imagination cant be that limited that you had to cut it off that abruptly, it was just starting to get interesting. I thought the beginning looked alittle dull when it morphed into a fish but i have to say that it really got interesting when it morphed into the baseball and the guy threw it, that came off really smoothly and showed that this could of actually worked.
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I have never seen more of a solid flash piece then this one here, in the field of a tralier that is. I am alittle angry once again that you havent made a movie of this but have just stuck to an action packed trailer which i guess in the end is not that bad. Your graphics were good too, i liked how you moved off of stick ppl and have decided to try your luck at worms, although simple, look alot better.
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Ouch that came off as alittle sad. The flash was just basically a series of pictures collabarated together. The music was not bad but it was alittle plain. The graphics were not that good either, they seemed alittle simple in design and therefore lowered the overall quailty of the flash presentation.
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