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Gosh i didnt even know that there was a sim golf game!, you did do a good job with this short though. I liked how you had those sim reaction voices in there, they sounded like the original ones, were they? I sense though that it would be hard to come up with various jokes involving a golf course though. I liked how you did the speech bubbles, i could easily tell who was speeching. Simtastic!
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Wow, now that was an actionpacked fight, i have to give you credit for coming up with so many new moves. One thing that did bother me however was that there wasnt any vocie over actor for the end preview part, i understand not adding voices to the characters but alittle narrating wouldnt hurt.. oh well i still enjoyed that part of it. The idea of adding in the hedgehogs was creative aswell, i really liked there travelling machine heh.
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Well that was alittle odd, i watched a scribble trying to cross a chasm. Although it was a simple design on the character for this flash it seemed quite cute for some reason. You seemed to be trying for a looney tunes type cartoon short here, but i didnt think it turned out that creative. There was no need for this to be black and white so it should have been colored. At the end "it" should have made the journey to the other end, that was just harsh.
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Ouch that was alittle hard to sit through, sorry but i just didnt get your sense of humour at all in this flash. The jokes seemed pretty plain and had no wit to them whatsoever. I do appreciate your attempt though. The graphics again werent very well done and up until the killing scene at the end i was mostly reading text on a plain background. The sound effects were also generic, you could have mizxed it up with acouple of original effects.
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That reminded me of an awards show tribute, heh. I did recognize alot of those characters though which was a sad thing. The unusual effect you did with the pictures, a sort of painted effect, looked odd and out of place to be honest. The ceremonial music did go well there too. I am glad that you didnt just take screenshots and pasted them into a flash, i can see you put effort into it.
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Sorry sir that was way too short for my liking, it turned out to be something like 4 seconds. The animation did look good though although i would much rather have it for a decent length of time. Did spike say that line in japanese? what did he say? you should have put subtitles in and the audio was alittle muffled. I liked what you were going to do, its just that you didnt do.
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Was that dude waiting until the other guy came up with something better to do then use the computer?, i know i would turn off the computer if a buddy of mine was wearing a chicken suit. In a less dramatic way this reminds me alot of ppl that just irritate you all day when your on the computer, with phone calls, door bells and general ppl in the house already. I liked that simple black and white effect with only a splash of color and having no background made you focus more on what was happening. Cute flash.
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XD this is actually and experimental thing , I did it for one of my classes...and I've started a 5 episode mini series, but it's kinda needs a kick in the butt to get going...
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Oh my gosh was that a violent piece of anal expulsion or what?, gross graphics on that sir, and the simplicity of your background with you only drawing the features was very creative and added a nice touch to your style. What i really think that would have made this better was if you wrote the message in the extrements on the wall. Nice short funny flash in the end though, dont be afraid to make loud noises louder!
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ok...play with sound, got it...
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Age 37, Male
Reviewer
Open Universities Australia
Newgrounds.com
Joined on 7/15/02
SimGolf Shorts Hole #1 
Super Mario bros Z ep 2 (old series) 
The Chasm 
The Little Blue Rabbit 
A Tribute to Anime 
Cowboy Bebop short 
Chicken Suit for the Soul 
Modern Art 