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Well it was a really simple setup to a decent joke. I thought this could have been impoved by the use of voice actors to say the narrator parts. The choice of music at the end was good and the picture was pretty funny too. Overall a good short that needed just a little more effort put into backgrounds and sound to make it stand out more.
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Your animation for the part at the start in space was very smooth. I liked the way you designed the city too. The robot sound effects for when he walked across the room were probably not the right selection as it didnt suite very well. The main guy that shot the robot was very cool. Overall your background music really made this flash work.
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Vey strange idea for a short this time around in your third installment. Like your character said it didnt really go anywhere but then you hit us with the funny part of him getting shot that made up for the rest of the episode. The character designs were good and i thought the music suited it nicely.
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Kinda interesting, your choice of music was very good it would be nice if you had put up a credit for the author of the music. The graphics for the dollar note were quite good too. Overall a decent effort.
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It seemed a little bit too short. The background music was good and your theme with the background and the characters were all very good it just seemed a little short and didnt go anywhere. I think it would be improved with a longer fighting sequence to build up to the moment when he changed sides.
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Well to be honest it looked like an amateurs first effort but because it actually was your first flash its alright. I thought your backgrounds were probably the highlight for me. In future try and make the title screen a little more professional and add alittle bit of personality and uniqueness to it.
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Very weird, thats what comes to mind with this. It was pretty funny and your animation for when the turd hits the wall was good. Also thought your background music, leading up to the joke was good and the groaning was funny. Oveall a good job.
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Oh man, how did you do the voice so well, did you edit together things bush has said in seperate speeches or are you impersonating him because that is really good. The character designs were the highlight for me, the different characters in the crowd were very cool especially liked the wicked witch from the wizard of oz. Overall a very solid flash, the pokemon doll was a nice touch too.
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Good effort your anime style character design for the girl was very well done and the guy looked good too. The animation was a little rough but not that noticeable. You backgrounds are the only thing letting it down, you have everything else going for you including humour, loading page was different in a good way too!
I would like to give as many authors as i can, straight to the point feedback with my reviews. So it would be nice if you could return with a response :)
Age 37, Male
Reviewer
Open Universities Australia
Newgrounds.com
Joined on 7/15/02
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