Very good
I have to say the thing that captures me the most with these lock legion shorts is the get voice acting and the subtitles are very professionally done too. I thought the walnut and master lock lines were great. Overall very cool.
Very good
I have to say the thing that captures me the most with these lock legion shorts is the get voice acting and the subtitles are very professionally done too. I thought the walnut and master lock lines were great. Overall very cool.
Haha, thanks.
Hilarious
I loved this short, the vibrant colours, the get quality sound and the joke itself had me laughing along with the two locks. Overall a very solid and well thought out short.
~H-J~
Well done
Very funny flash indeed, i thought that the character designs of the narwals were great, full of color, loved the song, really upbeat and made me want to smile, looping the song was a great idea too, because it just rolls on so nicely. Overall im very impressed by this.
H-J
Well done
This has alot of potential to be made into a series, i mean you really have hit the mark in terms of humour and i think that this idea could be developed to form several more shorts. Loved the voice acting!
H-J
Liked
Well the first point that sticks out to me after watching your movie was how you were able to always keep the shot moving with heaps of different angles which was great. I thought that the mystical music in the background suited it well. Overall a very solid effort only thing that could have been improved was the graphics.
~H-J~
Liked
That was actually pretty cool how the conversation bounced off each of the characters so well, i thought the dialog was the key to your flash and you were able to keep to fresh and funny. I thought that your character designs of the locks were great as well. Overall a well rounded flash piece.
~H-J~
Liked
Well that was a pretty unique flash short and pretty controversial as well because its of a red rectangle floating from the left of the screen to the right and then looping. I have to give some marks for humor as i did giggle at this short. Overall just need alittle more, maybe a few different shapes floating.
~H-J~
Liked
Well that was really random, i was digging it, what stuck out the most about your short was the voice acting, i mean you guys hit some really good points in your dialog, so much so that i thought it was hilarious but you did deliver a few lines later on in the piece that were a little weaker in emotion. I thought the character designs were simple but you were able to make each character unique with different clothing which was a smart idea. Overall a great piece.
~H-J~
well thx alot, an honest opinion is favorable, because alot of reviewers either love alot or hate it and theres no reasons given either way. so i will use your suggestions. on another note the simple appearances are so they dont retract from the comedy(and they easier to make) my Sonic Armaggeddon (in production) looks great at the moment...I was shooting for a "fallen angel" quality, which it certainly is not, but it looks alot better than some. much appreciated H-J thx again.
Liked
Well there were two things that i liked about this short and they were your great loop of music and that striped effect that you had, the green color really looked nice. Overall a pretty funny short, would love to see a full version of the song though.
~H-J~
I would like to give as many authors as i can, straight to the point feedback with my reviews. So it would be nice if you could return with a response :)
Age 37, Male
Reviewer
Open Universities Australia
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