Hamy-jamy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shit Skater]

Wow

It was very short but i thought you did add in enough to make it entertaining. The voice acting of the skater was cool, actually it was kinda funny. I thought the animation was a bit weak but the graphics were good, you drew the skating rink pretty well. Overall length was an issue but it was funny.

[Apple-Face Goes To Work]

Weird

Well let me just start by saying that the rabbit riding was my favorite part of your flash, very funny. I thought your animation through the whole length of this flash short was superb, just perfectly fluent stuff, really a joy to watch. I thought the character design of the apple faced character was good though it would have been cool if you had added other facial features instead of just the mouth as he would have looked even more creepier. The song you selected as the basis for this animation to play off of was terrific, sounded really mello and suited it well. Overall a fun music video.

[GET DOWN!!!]

This shows little effort = little entertainment

I think the only thing that has made this enjoyable is the music, which seems to be in beat with the movement of the stick figure. What needs to be improved, firstly the stick figure character design could have done with being a full bodied character, some animation of the said character would have made it more entertaining, some sort of background instead of the white background or even some color would have shown that you had put in some effort, as it is, it looks like it has been rushed together in a short amount of time. Overall this was just not worked on nearly has hard as it should have been and thus it comes across as a mess of a flash animation, take more time in the future to fully develop your flash ideas before publishing them.

philos27g responds:

True, but it was only a test. And I was bored.

[Nerd-school fights]

Hmm

Not bad you showed some potential here with your first flash effort. Some things that you should improve on, firstly you need to add sound some bullet sound effects especially would have improved the feel of your flash and secondly some more effort with your graphics would have made the killings seem more real and thus give the flash an overall more gritty feel. There are several aspects that were really well done though, such as the length of the flash which was great you gave your flash enough time to build up to a cliffhanger of a finale and the character design of the main character was interesting. Overall a solid effort, needs sound though.

[Today In The Past - Nov 1]

Nice

Great work, i think your onto a winner here with this type of series as it can be both informative and funny!, i hope to see you come out with more of these in the future. The highlight of your flash had to be the voice acting which was just superb, you were able to come across as serious but overly so, so that it was funny. The images were well selected also. I think you could extend the length of these by adding more events then just the one, for more viewing entertainment. Overall a very good effort, lots of fun.

[PREPARE]

Wow

I couldn't agree more with you about how great bill murray is and i think that you have expressed in flash relatively well how you feel. I thought the highlights of your flash had to be the great background music and the various pictures of bill murray, was it just me or did the beat of the music time in well with the changes of the background color?, the only thing missing here, is more bill murray images. Overall a great tribute to the man.

[Bill Murray's Editorial]

Great

Its hard to believe that bill murray has been making us laugh for so long. This was just fantastic, i loved the whole skit and your stick figures and pictures added to the story quite a bit, it gave me a good visual display as to what was going on. I thought the simplicity of your sketches allowed me to imagine the rest of the scene myself. Overall a very good job.

[arfenhouse teh movie too]

Perfect

Incredible, its hard to describe in a review what made this so great but ill name a few of the things. The most important part of your flash was the humour, there was basically a continous flow of humour over this quite lengthy piece, even after the story ended near the middle you still had plenty of random jokes to be played out. I thought the voice acting was terrific and the effects you did with the subtitles were great. Overall this is faultless and is what makes newgrounds so great.

[Wii Are Sold Out]

Wow

Very simply designed, that is probably the only thing lacking with your flash, its just missing a few bits of detail for the background layouts. The humour was terrific and only worked thanks to your crazy rage induced voice acting for the employee. The character designs were fabulous. Overall very well done.

[Art Class Hijinks]

Nice

That was a lot of fun to watch, i thought the highlights of your flash was the fantastic way you drew the teacher and the students, although it was a little strange that there was only like five kids in the classroom, the voice acting was the other key point that i enjoyed, the depressing tone of the teacher was captured perfectly. Overall a very good job and very entertaining.