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I liked the Jackson inclusion at the last moment had to be the highlight of this flash and thats not because you did a bad job with the flash if anything it is because you had done such a good job at displaying the boredom that i bought into it and even the changing of images on the blackboard didnt seem to slap me out of it. It was good to see you reuse some characters in this but also keep it new and fresh with the inclusion of a different area and the teacher. Overall the voice acting also seemed to come off as alot better and made for a superb watch.

~HJ~
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With its current length i dont think that you had enough time to branch out. I like what you did in the small amount of time you gave yourself, and if you were just testing the style i would have to say that it can work as long as you keep it fast paced and get creative with the way sonic kills the enemies as he goes along, remember to include alot of memorable backgrounds from the sonic games so people feel more attached to moments and you will get alot of good feedback. Overall the song idea was fresh, i also thought the pace at which sonic was racing was well thought out.

~HJ~
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Electronix responds:

Very useful review...thanks for that and I'll keep your advise in mind...

heh...I only seem to do videos to music...Im rubbish at voice actint however ;P

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Its good to see you trying to mix up the scene alittle, although i did enjoy the first two characters more, you were mainly using the drunk character in this, the other character was really only there for the end joke. Overall i was quite interested in how much this diferred from your first installment, keeping the same basic character design does give you your own personal style too, nice.

~HJ~
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I thought this was quite fun, i know alot of people who have done this sort of thing by focusing the short on the newgrounds website but it has never really gone over well with the audience this seems to suffer the same fate but i liked the joke, i thought the part that let it down was the voice acting i mean the transfer was weak. Overall i laughed at the guy attempting to pronounce the words, i like the simplicity.

~HJ~
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Again my eyes were entranced in this simple flash. Your credits at the start werent that impressive but once you got into it you went onto create a very zany entrance in your series of line shorts. You added alot more solid objects in this one though which is kind of a risky choice but it all worked out. Overall im still not pleased with the durations but am interested enough.

~HJ~
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