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Loved the images in the window as this was happening, i think i saw 'muffin out there, so cute. I liked this flash i mean there was a load of dialogue and i dont blame you for using speakonia, i mean bahamut's voice needs to be speakonia im use to it being that. The two good websites im sure would get on alot of peoples nerves but i loved it, well done flash all around guys.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
I love sarcasm, and I loved this review. :D
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Again my eyes were entranced in this simple flash. Your credits at the start werent that impressive but once you got into it you went onto create a very zany entrance in your series of line shorts. You added alot more solid objects in this one though which is kind of a risky choice but it all worked out. Overall im still not pleased with the durations but am interested enough.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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You should name your flash titles "fun with lines #" so people know what they are going to get. I liked this i mean there is a limit to the creativity you can have with lines but you havent found it yet, and while keeping the background music fresh and different has kept this series tight. Overall another entertaining entrance in your series.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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Creative comes to mind for this although you could always improve. You should mix up the background colors alot more and create a sort of 'trippy' effect and also try stretching the duration out alittle more, people get angry when these simple flashes are short. Overall i was amused with this.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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I can be entertained so easily some times and this is an exact case of that, you were able to animate together a simple short that was quite interesting. Your music choice let you down alittle though, i dont know if it was the transfer or if the song was just not meant for it because i was not feeling the music. Overall you got pretty creative with this even though your graphics were simple, i ended up being quite impressed.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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Im impressed by this, i mean you used a simple trick that has been done numerous times but the only difference being that you have put together a full flash experience not just the lines, you added the music.. one of the key points to getting these sorts right, the addition of the lyrics was also a pretty cool extra. Overall simple, but i was not bored and thats all you need to accomplish.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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Do you know what this reminds me of?, the opening to Clarissa Explains It All. I have to admit that i can see that you have put alot of effort into this and sir it has payed off i mean it was gross when it had to be, it was funny when it had to be also. I like how you intergrated alittle bit of claymation into this also. Overall i was really entertained, oh and for the record the hat bit was my fav, what can i say? im easily pleased.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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You do the sad flash pieces quite well and hey i love that sort of style. Your graphics arent very good in this one but you were able to piece together a nice story so it kinda makes you care less about the graphics. I liked the use of the over the top angle on this too, your backgrounds were altitle too simple in most of the scenes though. Overall you again put an interesting song behind an interesting flash short.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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Well this is the second flash of yours i have watched which took advantage of a good song to lift the flash short. You used a couple of interesting angles in this one, i liked the over the top one for when he went into the bed, the fact that you used simple character designs did take away from the effect of the piece. I thought that the animation was again cheaply done but you were able to transition the scenes pretty well and you did end the piece on a semi-happy moment so im pleased.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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Liked the glare from the computer screen on his face, and i noticed the tones you did in a couple of scenes. That song in the background was quite catchy and strangely fitted this quite well sort of like a music video for the song. I thought that major part that needed improvement was probably your animation as it seemed that you used alot of cheap tricks to animate. Your graphics on the other hand didnt bother me for some reason the odd character design was interesting to me. Overall good depressing song, with a slightly passionate edge.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
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Age 36, Male
Reviewer
Open Universities Australia
Newgrounds.com
Joined on 7/15/02
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