Hamy-jamy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cheer Up]

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Wow well what really impressed me about this flash short was the crazy way you destorted your character designs every few moments some really wacky designs came up from that. I thought that the lack of backgrounds did effect it though i mean ppl like to see something in the background be it just a color or a simple feature. I thought that the standout part of your flash had to be that incredible song you based it around.

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[Detective Gizmo]

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Well man have you ever hit the humour button so hard then you have in this flash. The voice acting was great i mean you actually had the appropriate voice for each of the characters. I thought that the style you were attempting was both very interesting and really did give something new to flash animation, i mean all the character designs were one offs that i havent seen done in the longest time.

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[HAPPY: 1]

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Its very risky when you go for a very simple flash short to get a good response, you either create something magical with the simplicity or it just falls short, this unfortunetly fell short. What i felt was wrong with it probably came down to two things, the fact that the backgrounds were basically a line and the lack of voice acting that could have been added for the bird laughing. While you did play a couple of things right, i did like your background music and i thought that the skeleton design was good.

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[£The §pam §hoppè ©]

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You did have the right idea, and i am sure that on paper this looked like a great creation, i think that the problem came from the graphics that were used, they seemed awfully scrappy and i think that some of the character designs were just plain weird. What i thought saved this flash had to be the great voices you used for each of the characters especially the old lady hilarious. Overall you need to work on the layouts for your flash shorts, unless you want them to look like that.

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[Fritto Lite Due]

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Quite different in terms of graphics, it was as if it was a clash of styles between sprites and self drawn characters. I thought that having the voice over acting in a different language was really odd but did bring a new unique flavour to this and i think it wouldnt have came off as good as with english voice overs. I did think that the humour was good, but maybe you could have taken it alittle longer before killing off the character.

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[Illusions]

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Not bad, i liked the idea of a selection of different illusional pictures but i thought that you didnt add enough, maybe you could make this into a series. I have seen acouple if not all of those ones before though yet they were still good to check out. Maybe adding alittle bit of light music in the background for next time too would help, just some gentle number.

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[Marijuana Cigarets]

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That looping in the background was really annoying to me sorry, but it did have the feel of the advertisment which was good. The graphics werent overly impressive but they didnt have to be i did like your background design though. The joke at the end once you had showed the product was decent i mean it was like an incredibly funny joke but i did chuckle. Maybe alittle more work on closeups of the scenes would make this flash come off alot better.

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[Turkey's Revenge]

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Short and sweet and over all not really that bad. I thought that not adding any voices into this was kinda risky i mean voice usually does help flash products alot but your didnt need it, unless you could have comeup with something funnt for the hunter to say to himself i guess. But i thought that the stare off that you did for the flash was good although the backgrounds were alittle bit plain in design. I didnt see the ending coming either, a real shocker, i thought that you would take your time to setup the revenge but you took it out straight away.

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