Hamy-jamy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My participation to apple]

Nicely done

Not usually a big fan for stick animations but you did it well. You kept it simple and instead of doing the generic stickman fight you had a creative little idea for the stickman to go after the apple, which turned out to be really funny, i especially liked him choking at the end. There was a hole in your animation though that i think some background music could have filled, just seemed empty in that area. Overall a great effort.

[The End Of Something]

Good job!

Well you did a great job with two things here, the first was the humour which was terrific i especially liked the last joke of getting real drunk and then going swimming, classic. The voice acting was the other thing that i liked about your flash, the voices were so great and its a shame you gave no credits at the end for them!, the guy with the purple hats voice was superb. Overall a great short.

~H-J~

[Sun Creem]

Sweet

Very cute little flash you have designed here, the highlight for me had to be that great piano piece you had playing in the background it really setup the flash the perfect way. The humour was good i especially liked how he rolled onto his side and caught on fire. The character designs were great for the sun but the guy eating the ice cream could have had some more effort put into his appearance. Overall a funny short.

falling responds:

Thank you for the compliments and constructive criticism, appreciate it!

[mmautrey website PROMO 1]

Nice work

Very unusual chemistry between the two characters the robot was really funny, i loved his voice and when he laughed and then cut the other guy off for laughing too, that was gold. The character designs were great. Overall a solid effort.

mmautrey responds:

Thank you, and by the way, that robot was me. >: ]

[Introduce BadToupeeClock]

Sweet

Oh man, that was very interesting i mean as an introduction flash this was great but i loved how they were taking notice of the fourth wall and were pointing out where we were looking from, i thought you could have used that joke for a bit longer actually, very original. I thought the humour was great, especially the lines from strawberry clock. Overall i thought your character designs were great, the subtitles were nicely presented and it was just an awesome job all round.

[Low Resoluted Short Ep. 3]

Quite simple

Well i have to say that it was really short but it made me laugh which i think was what you were aiming for. The lack of anything in your flash as a style is kinda fascinating and made the use of the baby sound all the more enjoyable when it was played as the punchline. The character designs were simple but they had enough bodily detail to set them apart from stick figures. Overall a cute flash short.

[Luigi's Magic Button]

Well done

You had a good point to your flash short with the last words of this flash it pretty much summed up my feelings of luigi. The background music was authentic and added a lot to your piece and the characters that you included here were great, i especially liked your use of link in here and his music to go with it!, overall a funny short which had a point, nice work!

[Project Sparta]

Nice work

The first thing that stood out for me was the unique character designs you used to play out this scene from 300, very different and it made your short stand out to me. The way you displayed your subtitles were a little annoying and could have been better placed at the bottom of the page. Overall i like how you kept the flash quiet until the sound clip and your humour was pretty decent.

Radicalstich responds:

Thank you for the Constructive Criticism, i see what you mean with the subtitles and will keep that in mind. And i realise that it is very short. There are multiple sounds, don't know if you heard them all. And not sure if their was much humour their but thanks for the review!

[Madness Accept 4 Trailer]

Alright then...

Well i have to open my review with a complaint about the amount of violence you have used in this, not because i didnt enjoy it but because i dont know if you should be giving that much fighting and action away in the trailer!, i hope you can still top it in the full version. The background music you used was intense and fast paced just like your flash so it suited in well. Overall a great job and i am looking forward to your full lengthed entry.

~H-J~

LNR123 responds:

Well there is alot of fighting. i had no scenes really that had no fighting, They get to a point of no Fighting but that hasnt been hit yet i am on 2000 frames

[Start The Fire]

Well done

You pretty much had me at your musical selection to be honest with you, i love this song and it shows that you have a lot of passion for this song too. I mean you would have had to search every single picture for this song and man does he name a few things in the song, so great work with your searches. The only thing i would have improved is the chorus you just seemed to zoom in on the one picture of a fire. Overall a very good flash that shows a great deal of effort and time dedicated to it.