Hamy-jamy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I need cash]

Strange

Well the idea was good but i thought it would have been a lot better off if you were able to contain your idea to one flash short as i think thats all the idea deserved. The way you drew up the main character was interesting i liked your use of a big head for him, kinda funny. This would have been heaps better with a bit of music in the background just to kill the silence. Overall a good idea, just wished the story was resolved.

[A cat named Snuggles]

Funny

Loved the way you set this up in front of the fire place and then zoomed into the fire to start the short, The short itself with the cat was great i loved how you made it slightly interactive by making the viewer initiate the violence and did you ever go overboard with the kill very funny stuff. Your humour was probably the highlight though your violence was a close second, overall an entertaining short.

[clock.]

Sweet deal

Was it just me or did that leave it open for possibly a sequel?, The way you handled this whole clock animation was terrific i love how you violently made orange clock take out battery clock and i loved how he backed down to the king but then the twist at the end was great. The background graphics of the bar were very well done. Overall a funny short.

[The Incident]

Well done

I loved your written lines at the end they were quite funny, i thought the music combined with your unique style made this very creepy. The bird being placed in the ice cream cone was a confusing moment and then it was all hilarious after that. Overall a great effort.

[Bleach: alones sing along]

Nice

Well because its in a different language it would have been nice to have understood what was being said so maybe in the future add in some subtitles for us english speaking folk. The character design of the guy singing was pretty cool i especially liked the hair. The colorful background also added to your flash short. Overall a good effort but perhaps you could have made it longer and used more angles then just the stationary one angle that you used.

~H-J~

sasuke29 responds:

Thanks so much. yeah I know it was short and not too many camera angles. But I'm still new will flash so yeah I'm still learning. But thanks so much. any help or tips is appreciated. ^_^

[Cuddles Day Out]

Liked your short

Well i have to come up with a complaint first up and that is that you should have included the scene at the end where they feast on the mouse as we grew to like the two main characters and the mouse seemed more of the bad guy then anything and it would have been nice to see him get what he deserved. I thought your voice acting was great but it was a shame that the quality of sound for the voice acting wasnt great because it made it hard to understand certain parts, subtitles would have solved that problem. Overall a good effort, funny stuff.

[The Stick Guys]

Nice work

I like how you just randomly threw us into a situation where he is being tortured without explaining anything it usually doesnt work for flash animation but it worked here. I thought the buttons were your biggest problems, i mean i like to sit back and watch a short not have to click the button to read the next speech bubble. Overall a good effort, your humour and reference to yourself at the end were highlights.

[Pizza Call (preview)]

Shows promise

Well you should firstly rename this to a teaser as that is what it was, i mean it was an interesting insight into the story but it played to me more like a taste of whats to come then explaining anything about the actual plot. I dont usually like stick animation but you were able to give him detail in the close ups so i have to give you respect for that. Overall a decent effort, i hope you use voice acting in the main pizza call flash.

[Old Man Monopoly]

Entertaining, but strange

It had a good bases its just a shame you didnt do more with the character, i mean ill sum the flash up like this, the character came from the left of screen poked the lens and then laughed hysterically. I suppose it was a little creepy not the laughing but more so the way you animated him walking onto the centre stage. The music is classic and was used appropriately here. Overall a good effort.

[APTF - Episode 2]

Nice job

Well your humour was just superb in this, i loved the farting and the way he fell out of the window of the high rise at the end after trying to light a cigarette was just perfect. It is always a bit of a toss up when it comes to graphics with clock movies but yours was terrific, the backgrounds were fantastic and even better then those was your character designs, i especially enjoyed strawberry clocks cameo and i liked how you had him have first billing in the credits, it was a little touch but a great one.