Hamy-jamy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My first cartoon]

Sweet

Oh man that boobs line at the end was great, come to think of it this was all pretty solid, a very good rant on flash. The graphics were decent in the background with the posters of anime shows but your character design for the main person was great even though you only showed the womans portrait because you were able to comment on the lack of hands and legs and even make fun of it. Overall a very good effort, your voice acting was the highlight.

[I'm A Spider]

Fun

For a flash that was mostly made up of pictures this was terrific, very entertaining thanks to your great voice acting for the spider, which kinda reminded me of bill from king of the hill. Your humour was great and didnt seem immature at any stage which is a rarity here on newgrounds. The musical number at the end after the spider was finished was the highlight for me. Overall a nicely done short.

[Reminiscence]

Good

Well as an opening to a planned series i thought you did a good job of engaging the audience and that was mostly done by the music which was well selected. The animation was the highlight for me, the kick he delievered to the guard was well done. I hope you add more action in future installments.

[The Dude]

Good work

Well your animation for the fighting scenes were good and i especially liked the seen where he was asking him for directions and simply took the cap off his head, kinda funny and not really that violent, so i enjoyed it. The best part of your flash was your good character designs, the mask the main guy was wearing was pretty awesome. Good choice with the music but next time try adding in some voice acting as well.

[The word " Fuck "]

Nice

Even though you have stated the voice acting wasnt yours i have to say that i enjoyed it quite a lot and i have to say that i learnt more about the word then i ever needed to know. Your use of pictures on the projector were great. Overall a very solid effort and you were able to keep the setup of your flash very simple.

[Altair's day off]

Terrific

I thought you did a great job here especially for your first flash effort, it was highly enjoyable. I like how you had him sleeping on the couch before he was rudely interrupted by the beggar at the door, the sound clips of the door knocking were probably the highlight of your flash as they sounded as if they were coming from my front door! Overall, good effort and i loved your character design for the main guy, the looping was a little annoying but nothing major.

~H-J~

krustyismyname10 responds:

The looping irritated me too, I think I figured out how to fix it though, I'm going to remake this one with more violence, better animation, and possibly some speech

[New Moon in 24 seconds]

Good job!

Well you pretty much summed up the entire movie, i mean i wish you made this before i saw it as it would have saved me my cash and my time. The voice acting for your short was great i loved the narrators voice so simple and he never showed any emotion in what was being said which made it funny. The different scenes were great also, i especially liked the attention to detail for jacob with his shirt off, hilarious. Overall a very good short.

~H-J~

[Grabbin' Pills]

Superb

Its a strange comment to say but thats exactly what it felt like the last time i took "pills" even down to the music, so i have to give you credit for sticking true to real life. Your use of two of the characters from left 4 dead was great and the voice acting for the two was by far the funniest thing about your flash effort. Overall a great short, your character designs were great, the background was detailed and the music was fantastic.

~H-J~

[Portalen Showdown 2]

Well done

Very unusal idea to make a touranment style flash, i like how you had a large amount of matches and you werent afraid to let the blood fly around, highly entertaining matches, my favorite had to be the semi with leetson in it as it had a bit of eveything and it looked as though he was going to lose until he spun it around on his opponent. The background music was my favorite part of your flash as it had a high amount of energy that went well with the fights. The table for the touranment looked a bit too simple for me, you should spend some time making it look more presentable. Overall i was very much entertained by your flash!

~H-J~

Endroil responds:

Like it or hate it, that's how it is huh. Yeah I guess the bad graphics are unbearable to some.

Thank you for your review - Personally I like the absolutely first battle most, that's the one I'm most proud of - It's also one of the shorter ones.

//Endroil

[Charley]

Well

The one thing that kinda brought your flash entry down was the music you used at the start it just didnt seem to fit the dark and scary style that you were portraying with your backgrounds. The character designs of the inmates were great very original and also creepy. Overall a great job with the graphics but just a bit more effort into song selection in the future will give your entries are more rounded and even result.